This term my writing group has been looking at the snowmanotron. The snowmanotron is a contraption that can create snowmen. We watched a video about it and then we drew a diagram of the snowmanotron. After we drew it we labeled all the parts and then planned all the steps it does to make a snowman.
We are writing an explanation of how it works, so far we have wrote an introduction each. I hope you enjoy it and comment your feedback on how I can improve on it.
Hi Bonnie Kya here!
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your story about the snowmanatron it sounded like fun writing. I loved your sentence about adult supervision! Maybe you could have added in a photo of your diagram. Your writing could even be an add it was very persuading. What is your favorite sentence in your writing? Awesome writing and post Bonnie!
From Kya