I found it hard to see what we need to keep to ourselves or post online
I found it easy to make the digital picture of our face because I have done it before at my old school.
Next time I might try to add more detail to my writing to make it more interesting.
Hi Bonnie
ReplyDeleteI really like how the colours are realistic like the jacket.
Next time you could put more detail.
Thank you for your helpful feed back.
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Hi Bonnie,
ReplyDeleteI'm from Hub Mako.
I like how your drawing looks really real. I also like how you did a description about yourself. I also like art it is one of my favourite things to do. I can tell your a good artist because of what your drawing looks like. The only thing I think you could change would be the background so it pops. But besides that it looks good.
Well Done Bonnie :D
Hi Larz, thanks for the desriptive feedback, if I do this again i'll make sure to make the backround pop
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ReplyDeleteKonnichiwa Bonnie. My name is Cadence and I go to Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you added lots of detail on your avatar, and your info about yourself is just perfect.
Hi Cadence, thanks for the feedback.
DeleteKia ora. My name is Katana and I attend at Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I love your digital picture of yourself! Its greet to see that you post amazing things like your experience in cross country,Kapa haka and etc .P.s i do kapa haka to!
ReplyDeleteHi Katana, Thank for the comment, that's cool that you do kapa haka too
DeleteKia ora Bonnie. My name is Kathryn and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love how you did your avatar and how you added so much detail and in it and also in your introduction so keep up all the good work and be better than before!
ReplyDeleteHello Kathryn, thanks for the great feedback
DeleteHello Bonnie! My name is Ruby and I go to Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you did your eyes because they look so real! It’s cool how you did your hair. I like how it goes from a little bit of dark brown to a lighter one.But maybe next time you could add just a little bit more detail. By the way, how long did it take you to complete your avatar?
ReplyDeleteAlso, good job! From Ruby.
Hi Ruby, thanks for your awesome feedback. It took me around half an hour.
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Hi Bonnie,
ReplyDeleteIt's Caitlyn here. I really like your drawing. I like how you added a lot of detail in your eyes they look really good. Next time you could maybe make the background a different colour. But overall it's really good.
Good Job,
Caitlyn
Hi Caitlyn, Thanks for the feedback, if I do something like this again I will make sure the backround is a colour.
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Hi my name is Brooklyn and I go to mangapapa school and I like your poiley line animation is is Rele cool and i liked they way you did you hira but mabe nexts time you sholed put a background in so then it well look nice
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